Portfolio for Writting III

Student ID: 08170

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C



(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)	letter to family	2009.04.08	6	293	8	0	0	0
1-01b (2009.04.20)
(1-01c)
1-02a (2009.06.01)	University Life★	2009.05.31	5	306	0	0	1	0
1-02b (2009.07.06)	University life	2009.06.25	5	310	4	0	0	0
(1-02c)
1-03a (2009.06.29)	Lilo and Stitch review	2009,06,29	6	422	0	0	0	0
1-03b (2009.07.13)	Lilo's life and my life	2009.07.15	6	449	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	28	1780	12	0	1	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [I like "letter to family", because I wrote about me everything!!]

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	letter to family	2009.04.08	19 words	Hi, Manami! I like movie too. I watched the movie "High School Musical the movie. I like it too!
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	letter to family	2009.04.08	19 words	Hi, Manami! I like movie too. I watched the movie "High School Musical the movie. I like it too!
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Fireworks!!	2009.07.05	15 words	Hello! Thank you for your inviting me!! I enjoyed it very much! Let's play again!
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	University life	2009.06.25	31 words	I like talk to friends and watching Korean drama too. I think KGU library should be get more Koream DVD.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2009.07.01	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	35 words
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	Pops Concert ((♪	2009.06.17	23 words	Can you play drums?A part of percussion is really cool.i like free jazz.If you have time, please check Masahiko Togasi.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2009.07.18	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	12 words	Hi, thank you for your coment!I can play the drums little.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• Everyone can read easy on my blog.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [I like talk to friends and watching Korean drama too. I think KGU library should be get more Koream DVD.]

• [Hi, Manami.I think so! But I don't watch all Korean DVD yet. When I have time, I want to watch those^^]

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 1-01	Wish Fish	2009.04.29	119	0
BR 1-02	The Band	2009.04.29	106	0
BR 1-03	Naughty Children	2009.05.08	28	0
BR 1-04	the New Baby	2009.05.23	65	0
BR 1-05	the Laughing Princess	2009.05.23	101	0
BR 1-06	Snow White	2009.05.31	200	0
BR 1-07	Amanda Pig, Schoolgirl	2009.06.19	202	0
BR 1-08	More Tales of Amanda Pig	2009.05.29	149	0
BR 1-09	Oliver, Amanda, and grandmother pig	2009.07.01	190	0
BR 1-10	The Gingerbread Man	2009.07.08	157	0
BR 1-11	Amanda pig and her best friend Lollipop	2009.07.17	107	0
BR 1-12	Milo's toothache	2009.07.17	101	0
---	---	Totals:	1525	0

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [My best book review is "Amanda pig, school girl", because the story is funny and I can read easy. I can feel family or friends love.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	○
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):Yes	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	○
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	○
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 12 other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. books(12) brainstorming (1) essay prep. (3) essays(5) free-writing(1) lists(1) movies(4) outlines(1) quick posts(1) reviews(14) speaking(1) university(2)	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		○
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? 30 posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	○
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? 95 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? 2 posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: The Writing Studio Blog wiki	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...

2. ...

3. ...

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• You-tube
  

• remark on movie or books
  

• witing diary
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• to write with many words
  

• to write about real story
  

• to write with happy
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).

2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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