2009年7月18日土曜日
My high school ((♪
First, I met a math’s teacher. He looks very scare but funny. When I go there, every time we meet. He is a busy man.
Second, I went to the teacher’s room and I met my class teacher. He is very old but fine. He teaches English. I respect him, because he knowing about many things. He has been to many countries so I like his talks very much!!
Last, we visited music room. We belonged to the brass band club before. Now, our junior is practicing for brass competition. We listened theirs music. The music gave me gooseflesh, because they are good player. I want to play the percussion with my same member.
I always gave me a power in high school so I love my high school very much!!
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2009年7月17日金曜日
BR 1-12: Milo's toothache
There were two children who name are Milo and Dan. One day, they were playing Ping-pong. That time, Milo felt pain him tooth, so he decided to go to dentist. His many friends were worried him so they run after him. Children have a bad image. They thought that is terrible place.
I like dentist, because there are kind people and there are my favorite books. I am going to same dentist since I was a child. Today, I went to the dentist because I had bad three teeth. I keep going there about two months.
(101 words)
BR 1-11: Amanda pig and her best friend Lollipop
Story is that. Amanda has a cute and shy friend who name is Lollipop. She is shy so she speaks whisper. They likes to take care of theirs doll so always they have it. Lollipop has a younger sister. The sister name is Lili. She cannot say Lollipop’s name, because to say difficult for her. One day, Amanda spent in Lollipop’s house. She had enjoyable time in there. Midnight, she cannot sleep and felt scared. So she came back Amanda’s house with her father.
When I was a child, I have best friends. We played every time.
(107 words)
2009年7月16日木曜日
Change ((★
First, I felt excited. It took about 2 hours. My beautician was a nice guy. We talked about many things. Now, my hair color is little brown. I am very glad!! I had a good time^^
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2009年7月15日水曜日
No Music No Life ((♪
I like Yuzu too!! They play the guitar and sing songs. My favorite song is "Natsuiro". The song is summer song and it makes me excited very much. I have never been to Yuzu's concert, but my mother and younger brother have been to Yuzu's concert. So I think that want to go there someday!!
(116 words)
Essay 1-03b: Lilo's life and my life
Maybe everyone think that Lilo is a poor person. In this movie, Lilo does not have not only parents but also some friends so I seemed to her very poor. The island, there are some children, but everyone is cold people. Lolo lives in Hawaii with her sister so she looks like mother for Lilo.
In my case, now, I think that I am very happy person. I have five people in my family, my father, mother, older sister, younger brother, and me. I am living with them. My father teaches me a lot of things. My mother cooks very delicious dishes and kindness. My sister always helps me when I have a any problem. My brother gives me power, because he is very funny. If I live with my sister, maybe I cannot live peacefully, because, we always depend on my mother. So I cannot do everything with my sister.
Hawaii has a lot of traditional things. In this movie, I could find Hawaiian custom and tradition. For example, there were Hula, fire dance, surfing, dialect, clothes and so on. Everything is very impressive, but I am interested in Hawaiian dialect the best. “Ohana” mean is family. “Aloha” mean is “I love you”. “Mahalo” mean is “thank you”. I want to know about it more. The movie gave me about a lot of Hawaiian custom and traditional.
In my real life, I go to the school, I study, I work at part-time job, play with my friends. There are natural things and custom for me. I have a dream so I am studying now. And I need much money so I should work harder. And I have some friends so I can go many places with them. I have enjoyable time.
Lilo’s life and my life are very different. Lilo seem sad, but she has enjoyable time almost every day. I think so, maybe it is thanks to stitch for Lilo. She became have a enjoyable time with Stitch. I want to stitch too. If there is a stitch, I can enjoy every day more. But stitch is pull a stunt boy so to take care of him!!
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I wanna...
Previously, I was thinking that black hair is Japanese symbol so my hair was black long time. And I will go to New Zealand in this summer. But, the plan was cancel so I decided to dye my hair!!
(93 words)
2009年7月14日火曜日
In this summer...
In this summer, I have no plan so I decided to spend a lot of way in August.
I will take part in Marching Festival in KKW. When I was a high school student, I was belonged to the brass band club and we played marching. Every summer, we take part in it. In this summer, member is lacking. The teacher taught me about it. So I will help my junior. I like playing the instruments very much so I am looking forward to it!!
(120 words)
2009年7月13日月曜日
Last speaking class><
Our teacher was Mr. Minor. He is a very interesting man. That day, he told us big news. Next fall term, our teacher is not he. So I felt very sad!!
(75 words)
2009年7月12日日曜日
Part time job
To work is very difficult for me. But I can get many things. There are a lot of kind people so I can do my best!!
(56 words)
2009年7月11日土曜日
Speaking test
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2009年7月10日金曜日
Lunch time
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2009年7月9日木曜日
Yuan!!
I talked with four Chinese and Aya. We talked about a lot of things. For example, about summer vacation, Chinese famous places, Japanese singer, and so on. Mr. Tei gave us a yuan. A yuan equal about fifteen yen. I was very glad!! I knew about Chinese flower that is peony. And, they taught us about the Greet Wall of China. If I have a chance, I want to go there.
Every time, I have a very enjoyable time. They taught me many things so I can know about China. I want to know more.
(108 words)
2009年7月8日水曜日
BR 1-10: The Gingerbread Man
The story is that. There are old woman and old man and they have no children. One day, the woman made gingerbread man. It looks person. And she baked it in oven. Before long, she heard a voice in oven “Open the door!!” So she opens the oven door and the gingerbread man jumped out!! She said “Stop!” but he do not stop. He runs out of door. He met a fox. He runs faster than fox. That time, gingerbread man had to river but he cannot. So fox help him. He sit on fox’s nose and swims across the river. Finally, the fox ate the gingerbread man. The end!!
I think that the fox is very spiteful and gingerbread man is very simple minded. I am simple minded so I should be careful!!
Portfolio for Writting III
Student ID: 08170
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01a (2009.04.08) | letter to family | 2009.04.08 | 6 | 293 | 8 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-01b (2009.04.20) | ||||||||
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1-02a (2009.06.01) | University Life★ | 2009.05.31 | 5 | 306 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
1-02b (2009.07.06) | University life | 2009.06.25 | 5 | 310 | 4 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
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1-03a (2009.06.29) | Lilo and Stitch review | 2009,06,29 | 6 | 422 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-03b (2009.07.13) | Lilo's life and my life | 2009.07.15 | 6 | 449 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Totals | --- | --- | 28 | 1780 | 12 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[I like "letter to family", because I wrote about me everything!!]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | letter to family | 2009.04.08 | 19 words | Hi, Manami! I like movie too. I watched the movie "High School Musical the movie. I like it too! |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | letter to family | 2009.04.08 | 19 words | Hi, Manami! I like movie too. I watched the movie "High School Musical the movie. I like it too! |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Fireworks!! | 2009.07.05 | 15 words |
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2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | University life | 2009.06.25 | 31 words | I like talk to friends and watching Korean drama too. I think KGU library should be get more Koream DVD. |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.07.01 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 35 words | |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Pops Concert ((♪ | 2009.06.17 | 23 words |
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2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.07.18 | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 12 words | Hi, thank you for your coment!I can play the drums little. |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
Everyone can read easy on my blog.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
[I like talk to friends and watching Korean drama too. I think KGU library should be get more Koream DVD.]
[Hi, Manami.I think so! But I don't watch all Korean DVD yet. When I have time, I want to watch those^^]
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | Wish Fish | 2009.04.29 | 119 | 0 |
BR 1-02 | The Band | 2009.04.29 | 106 | 0 |
BR 1-03 | Naughty Children | 2009.05.08 | 28 | 0 |
BR 1-04 | the New Baby | 2009.05.23 | 65 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | the Laughing Princess | 2009.05.23 | 101 | 0 |
BR 1-06 | Snow White | 2009.05.31 | 200 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | Amanda Pig, Schoolgirl | 2009.06.19 | 202 | 0 |
BR 1-08 | More Tales of Amanda Pig | 2009.05.29 | 149 | 0 |
BR 1-09 | Oliver, Amanda, and grandmother pig | 2009.07.01 | 190 | 0 |
BR 1-10 | The Gingerbread Man | 2009.07.08 | 157 | 0 |
BR 1-11 | Amanda pig and her best friend Lollipop | 2009.07.17 | 107 | 0 |
BR 1-12 | Milo's toothache | 2009.07.17 | 101 | 0 |
--- | --- | Totals: | 1525 | 0 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[My best book review is "Amanda pig, school girl", because the story is funny and I can read easy. I can feel family or friends love.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):Yes | --- | --- |
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
You-tube
remark on movie or books
witing diary
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
to write with many words
to write about real story
to write with happy
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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2009年7月7日火曜日
Potruck party!!
Today’s after school, I had English conversation class. It was last class in the spring term so we had a party!! I bought some snacks and brought those. The members were seven people. Everybody brought some snacks. The best delicious snack is corn-chips. We ate it with a lot of kind sauce. Spicy sauce, avocado, meat and so on. I want to eat those again!!
And, we talked about “costoco” in Fukuoka. There are a lot of imports. I have been to there once. I want to go there with the members★
(114 words)(8404 words)
2009年7月6日月曜日
Afterschool!!
(33 words)
2009年7月5日日曜日
Fireworks!!
2009年7月4日土曜日
Jazz ((♪
I felt very glad because, I could hear them music. Jazz makes me happy and excited!! I want to play it again with the member but I cannot ;(
There were freshmen!! There were very pretty☆
I was surprised because my senior's play was very great and wonderful!! He can play the drums very well.
Last, I talked with the member. I was very happy!! I told them "It was very nice concert!!!
I had a very enjoyable time ;)
(120 words)
2009年7月3日金曜日
Examination!!
During the examination, I will go to Hausutenbosu in Nagasaki with my family. I am looking forward it!!
(74 words)(8045 words)
2009年7月2日木曜日
Volunteer in YMCA!!
Now, my partners are Mr. Tei and Mr. Taku. They are Chinese too. Today, we played "Shiritori", talked about examination, and so on. I had a enjoyable time with there.
YMCA will have a barbecue in August 5th. I want to go there!! But, I cannot ;( Because, I will go to New Zealand in August. I was very sad!!!
(120 words)(7971 words)
2009年7月1日水曜日
BR 1-09: Oliver, Amanda, and grandmother pig
First story, grandmother comes to Oliver and Amanda’s house. The children wanted to read a book and build with blocks but, she cannot because, she has bad eyes and bad legs.
Second story, when Amanda woke up early, grandmother was in the kitchen. Then, they ate breakfast together, go to the mailbox. They help each other.
Third story, Oliver did a trick. He takes grandmother’s glasses and put them on his tiger. Grandmother had a problem. Then, his father scolded him and grandmother comes in Oliver’s room. And she talks him about trick when she was a child. He promised that never trick.
Fourth story, that day was bad weather so grandmother and the children were find how to prevent thunder’s noise.
Last story, grandmother will go home next day. So the children and their parents made a “good by party”. They made a pink big cake.
I do not have memory when I was a child with grandmother. I really wanted to play with my grandmother looks like the grandmother of story.
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Dinner♭
Vacation plans!!
(122 words)(7584 words)
About blogging
(102 words)
Okonomiyaki((♪
Last week, I went to "Daiminji" with my friends, Kyoko and Aya. I like okonomiyaki very much!! To make is very difficult. I felt nervous!! But I could make well and delicious!! I was full^^
Get well with students in YMCA☆
That day, I felt tension but there’s teacher supported us. There were many foreigners. Most people were Korean and Chinese. They came to Japan to study Japanese. There are not only good speaker but also not good speaker.
First, we separated for blood type and we made four groups. Then, we introduced ourselves.
Next, we played games!! One game is a “Shiritori” with writing on paper. The game was very excited! Other game is “True or False”. The countries’ delegate are set questions. We could know about each countries! I was surprised because there is a orthopedics street!
Last, we had lunch!! Everybody brought food and we ate many kinds of dishes. I brought hot cake. There were a lot of countries food. I like chinese dish so I was very glad! Best food was Harumaki!! It was very delicious^^
The best memory is making same friends!! I met a girl who is a Chinese. She is very cute and good at speek Japanese!! Someday, I want to talk more with her again.
The party was very excited!! I had a enjoyable time. I want to be a Japanese teacher in the future. So I should study more!!