2009年7月18日土曜日

My high school ((♪

Yesterday, I went to my graduated high school with my friend, Saki. This high school is Tokai Dai2 high school.

First, I met a math’s teacher. He looks very scare but funny. When I go there, every time we meet. He is a busy man.

Second, I went to the teacher’s room and I met my class teacher. He is very old but fine. He teaches English. I respect him, because he knowing about many things. He has been to many countries so I like his talks very much!!

Last, we visited music room. We belonged to the brass band club before. Now, our junior is practicing for brass competition. We listened theirs music. The music gave me gooseflesh, because they are good player. I want to play the percussion with my same member.

I always gave me a power in high school so I love my high school very much!!
(151 words)(10080 words)

2009年7月17日金曜日

BR 1-12: Milo's toothache

This is a funny story.

There were two children who name are Milo and Dan. One day, they were playing Ping-pong. That time, Milo felt pain him tooth, so he decided to go to dentist. His many friends were worried him so they run after him. Children have a bad image. They thought that is terrible place.

I like dentist, because there are kind people and there are my favorite books. I am going to same dentist since I was a child. Today, I went to the dentist because I had bad three teeth. I keep going there about two months.
(101 words)

BR 1-11: Amanda pig and her best friend Lollipop

I read a book that there are two cute pigs.

Story is that. Amanda has a cute and shy friend who name is Lollipop. She is shy so she speaks whisper. They likes to take care of theirs doll so always they have it. Lollipop has a younger sister. The sister name is Lili. She cannot say Lollipop’s name, because to say difficult for her. One day, Amanda spent in Lollipop’s house. She had enjoyable time in there. Midnight, she cannot sleep and felt scared. So she came back Amanda’s house with her father.

When I was a child, I have best friends. We played every time.
(107 words)

2009年7月16日木曜日

Change ((★

Today, I went to the beauty salon to cat and dye my hair after school.

First, I felt excited. It took about 2 hours. My beautician was a nice guy. We talked about many things. Now, my hair color is little brown. I am very glad!! I had a good time^^
(51 words)(9721 words)

2009年7月15日水曜日

No Music No Life ((♪

Today, I went to TSUTAYA after school and I lent tree CDs. The artists are Arashi, Yuzu and Avril Lavigne. Theirs songs makes me happy and give me a power.I like Arashi the best!! There are 5 people in that member. If I can get theirs concert ticket, I will go to the concert with my family in this fall^^

I like Yuzu too!! They play the guitar and sing songs. My favorite song is "Natsuiro". The song is summer song and it makes me excited very much. I have never been to Yuzu's concert, but my mother and younger brother have been to Yuzu's concert. So I think that want to go there someday!!
(116 words)

Essay 1-03b: Lilo's life and my life

“Lilo and Stitch” is not only interesting but also impressive! There is a girl who name is Lilo, five years old and lives in Hawaii. She does not have parents so living with her sister. Her sister name is Nani. Lilo wants to make friends but cannot to make it. One day, Nani decides to have a pet for Lilo. Then, she found a looks like dog. Lilo like is and decide to have it. She named it “Stitch”. He is a stupid and destructive, but cute and powerful boy.

Maybe everyone think that Lilo is a poor person. In this movie, Lilo does not have not only parents but also some friends so I seemed to her very poor. The island, there are some children, but everyone is cold people. Lolo lives in Hawaii with her sister so she looks like mother for Lilo.

In my case, now, I think that I am very happy person. I have five people in my family, my father, mother, older sister, younger brother, and me. I am living with them. My father teaches me a lot of things. My mother cooks very delicious dishes and kindness. My sister always helps me when I have a any problem. My brother gives me power, because he is very funny. If I live with my sister, maybe I cannot live peacefully, because, we always depend on my mother. So I cannot do everything with my sister.

Hawaii has a lot of traditional things. In this movie, I could find Hawaiian custom and tradition. For example, there were Hula, fire dance, surfing, dialect, clothes and so on. Everything is very impressive, but I am interested in Hawaiian dialect the best. “Ohana” mean is family. “Aloha” mean is “I love you”. “Mahalo” mean is “thank you”. I want to know about it more. The movie gave me about a lot of Hawaiian custom and traditional.

In my real life, I go to the school, I study, I work at part-time job, play with my friends. There are natural things and custom for me. I have a dream so I am studying now. And I need much money so I should work harder. And I have some friends so I can go many places with them. I have enjoyable time.

Lilo’s life and my life are very different. Lilo seem sad, but she has enjoyable time almost every day. I think so, maybe it is thanks to stitch for Lilo. She became have a enjoyable time with Stitch. I want to stitch too. If there is a stitch, I can enjoy every day more. But stitch is pull a stunt boy so to take care of him!!
(449 words)

I wanna...

I want to cut my hair!! Because my hair is long so I fell very hot;; Tomorrow, I will go to beauty parlor after school, and I want to dye for my hair. Now, my hair color is black since I was born so I want to change!! I am looking forward to tomorrow^^/

Previously, I was thinking that black hair is Japanese symbol so my hair was black long time. And I will go to New Zealand in this summer. But, the plan was cancel so I decided to dye my hair!!
(93 words)

Go!!!☆

Today, I will go to my high school. So I am looking foward to go there!! I will talk with my teachers and junior.
(24 words)

2009年7月14日火曜日

In this summer...

Yesterday, teachers decided to not go to NZ. Today, I heard about it and I felt very sad;; In NZ, swine flub is expanding so I thought that we cannot help canceling go to there.

In this summer, I have no plan so I decided to spend a lot of way in August.

I will take part in Marching Festival in KKW. When I was a high school student, I was belonged to the brass band club and we played marching. Every summer, we take part in it. In this summer, member is lacking. The teacher taught me about it. So I will help my junior. I like playing the instruments very much so I am looking forward to it!!
(120 words)

2009年7月13日月曜日

Last speaking class><

I had a speaking class on 5 periods. I could pass the speaking test so could pass the member played a game. I had played the game so I could play smoothly. I played with Kyoko, Manami, Naotaka and me. We had enjoyable time.

Our teacher was Mr. Minor. He is a very interesting man. That day, he told us big news. Next fall term, our teacher is not he. So I felt very sad!!
(75 words)

2009年7月12日日曜日

Part time job

Today, I got up at 7:00 in this morning. Sometimes, my father works in Tsuruya. We were the same work place so I went there by car with my father.

To work is very difficult for me. But I can get many things. There are a lot of kind people so I can do my best!!
(56 words)

2009年7月11日土曜日

Speaking test

Today, I had a speaking test in this morning. I felt bad but I did my best! My partner was good speaker. I want to speak in English well…!!
(29 words)

2009年7月10日金曜日

Lunch time

Today, I had a lunch with my best friend, Fumi. When we were high school student, we were same class^^ We always talk about high school. We like Tokai Dai2 high school!! So we will go to there someday.
(39 words)

2009年7月9日木曜日

Yuan!!




Today, I went to the YMCA with friend, Aya. Today was volunteer day!

I talked with four Chinese and Aya. We talked about a lot of things. For example, about summer vacation, Chinese famous places, Japanese singer, and so on. Mr. Tei gave us a yuan. A yuan equal about fifteen yen. I was very glad!! I knew about Chinese flower that is peony. And, they taught us about the Greet Wall of China. If I have a chance, I want to go there.

Every time, I have a very enjoyable time. They taught me many things so I can know about China. I want to know more.
(108 words)

2009年7月8日水曜日

BR 1-10: The Gingerbread Man


I read the book that title is “The Gingerbread Man”. I borrowed it because the picture was very pretty and looks like comic.

The story is that. There are old woman and old man and they have no children. One day, the woman made gingerbread man. It looks person. And she baked it in oven. Before long, she heard a voice in oven “Open the door!!” So she opens the oven door and the gingerbread man jumped out!! She said “Stop!” but he do not stop. He runs out of door. He met a fox. He runs faster than fox. That time, gingerbread man had to river but he cannot. So fox help him. He sit on fox’s nose and swims across the river. Finally, the fox ate the gingerbread man. The end!!

I think that the fox is very spiteful and gingerbread man is very simple minded. I am simple minded so I should be careful!!
(157 words)

Portfolio for Writting III

Student ID: 08170

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C



(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).


1.1. Showcase

Short titles with links to blog posts

Dates
yyyy.mm.dd

W

C

L

P

M

1-01a (2009.04.08)

letter to family

2009.04.08

6

293

8

0

0

0

1-01b (2009.04.20)









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1-02a (2009.06.01)

University Life★

2009.05.31

5

306

0

0

1

0

1-02b (2009.07.06)

University life

2009.06.25

5

310

4

0

0

0

(1-02c)









1-03a (2009.06.29)

Lilo and Stitch review

2009,06,29

6

422

0

0

0

0

1-03b (2009.07.13)

Lilo's life and my life

2009.07.15

6

449

0

0

0

0

Totals

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28

1780

12

0

1

0


Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [I like "letter to family", because I wrote about me everything!!]



2.0. Comments

Showcase

Titles of posts with links

Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd

Numbers of words in comments

Qualities of comments**

2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

letter to family

2009.04.08

19 words

Hi, Manami! I like movie too. I watched the movie "High School Musical the movie. I like it too!

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*

letter to family

2009.04.08

19 words

Hi, Manami! I like movie too. I watched the movie "High School Musical the movie. I like it too!

2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

Fireworks!!

2009.07.05

15 words


Hello! Thank you for your inviting me!! I enjoyed it very much! Let's play again!

2.4. Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd

Total number of words in comments

Qualities of comments**

2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

University life

2009.06.25

31 words

I like talk to friends and watching Korean drama too. I think KGU library should be get more Koream DVD.

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?

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2009.07.01

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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?

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35 words


2.4.2. Any of your other posts*

Pops Concert ((♪

2009.06.17

23 words


Can you play drums?A part of percussion is really cool.i like free jazz.If you have time, please check Masahiko Togasi.

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?

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2009.07.18

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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?

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12 words

Hi, thank you for your coment!I can play the drums little.






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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

  • Everyone can read easy on my blog.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [I like talk to friends and watching Korean drama too. I think KGU library should be get more Koream DVD.]

  • [Hi, Manami.I think so! But I don't watch all Korean DVD yet. When I have time, I want to watch those^^]



3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase

Short titles
with links

Dates: yyyy.mm.dd

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

2007.05.16

39

1

BR 1-01

Wish Fish

2009.04.29

119

0

BR 1-02

The Band

2009.04.29

106

0

BR 1-03

Naughty Children

2009.05.08


28

0

BR 1-04

the New Baby

2009.05.23

65

0

BR 1-05

the Laughing Princess

2009.05.23

101

0

BR 1-06

Snow White

2009.05.31

200

0

BR 1-07

Amanda Pig, Schoolgirl

2009.06.19

202


0

BR 1-08

More Tales of Amanda Pig

2009.05.29

149

0

BR 1-09

Oliver, Amanda, and grandmother pig

2009.07.01

190

0

BR 1-10

The Gingerbread Man

2009.07.08

157

0

BR 1-11

Amanda pig and her best friend Lollipop

2009.07.17

107

0

BR 1-12

Milo's toothache

2009.07.17

101

0









































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Totals:

1525

0


Note
: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [My best book review is "Amanda pig, school girl", because the story is funny and I can read easy. I can feel family or friends love.]



4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase

Yes

No

4.1. Does your blog display an archive?



4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?



4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?



4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?



5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):Yes

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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)



  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")



  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)



  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)



  • "movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)



  • "brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")



4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?



  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?

    • 12 other labels attached to three or more posts

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    • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.

      • books(12)

      • brainstorming (1)

      • essay prep. (3)

      • essays(5)

      • free-writing(1)

      • lists(1)
      • movies(4)
      • outlines(1)
      • quick posts(1)
      • reviews(14)
      • speaking(1)
      • university(2)

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4.3. Links & media

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4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?



  • Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?



  • How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?

    • 30 posts including photos or other graphics

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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?



  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?

    • 95 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)

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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?



  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?

    • 2 posts including other media

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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:

    1. The Writing Studio Blog

    2. wiki


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  • What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference.

    1. ... (short link, date)

    2. ... (short link, date)

    3. ... (short link, date)


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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

  1. ...

  2. ...

  3. ...



5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

  • You-tube

  • remark on movie or books

  • witing diary



6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

  • to write with many words

  • to write about real story

  • to write with happy


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  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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2009年7月7日火曜日

Potruck party!!




Today was the “Star Festival”. I heard that Altair and Vega are married couple first time so I was very surprised!!

Today’s after school, I had English conversation class. It was last class in the spring term so we had a party!! I bought some snacks and brought those. The members were seven people. Everybody brought some snacks. The best delicious snack is corn-chips. We ate it with a lot of kind sauce. Spicy sauce, avocado, meat and so on. I want to eat those again!!

And, we talked about “costoco” in Fukuoka. There are a lot of imports. I have been to there once. I want to go there with the members★
(114 words)(8404 words)

2009年7月6日月曜日

Afterschool!!

Today's afterschool, I went to the convenience store in KGU and I met my friends, Mika, Naotaka, Ryota and me. I talked about many things with them. I had a good time ^^
(33 words)

2009年7月5日日曜日

Fireworks!!


Today, I played fireworks with my friends, Mika, Naotaka, Ryota, Kazuma and me.
I invited them. they were same circle members. Mika plays the trombone. Naotaka plays the guitar. Ryota plays the piano. Kazuma plays the trumpet. I play the drums.
yesterday's weather was bad but, Mika made us "teruteru bozu". So it was nice. I was very glad!!
After that, I went to the Mika's house and I talked with her. She is my best friend. I want to make memories with friends more!!
I had a enjoyable time with them((☆
(92 words)

2009年7月4日土曜日

Jazz ((♪

Today, I went to the university to listen concert with my friends, Aki, Yukari and me. Last year, I was belonged to the swing band circle and my part was drums. So I went there to cheer that member.

I felt very glad because, I could hear them music. Jazz makes me happy and excited!! I want to play it again with the member but I cannot ;(

There were freshmen!! There were very pretty☆

I was surprised because my senior's play was very great and wonderful!! He can play the drums very well.

Last, I talked with the member. I was very happy!! I told them "It was very nice concert!!!

I had a very enjoyable time ;)
(120 words)

2009年7月3日金曜日

Examination!!

Today, there were announcement for a spring examination. This time, I have about more than ten examinations. I have to study many kind subjects. There is psychology, writing, speaking, Japanese, and so on. I am anxious for psychology the best, because I have to learning by heart. I have a memory so I do my best!!

During the examination, I will go to Hausutenbosu in Nagasaki with my family. I am looking forward it!!
(74 words)(8045 words)

2009年7月2日木曜日

Volunteer in YMCA!!

Today's after school, I went to the YMCA in Obiyama by bicycle. When I arrived at there, I met Mr. Chin who is a Chinese. Last year, I was talking with him and Mr. Han. He is Chinese too. Mr. Chin became good speaker than last year. I was very glad!! Today, we talked about ourselves school, and so on.

Now, my partners are Mr. Tei and Mr. Taku. They are Chinese too. Today, we played "Shiritori", talked about examination, and so on. I had a enjoyable time with there.

YMCA will have a barbecue in August 5th. I want to go there!! But, I cannot ;( Because, I will go to New Zealand in August. I was very sad!!!
(120 words)(7971 words)

2009年7月1日水曜日

BR 1-09: Oliver, Amanda, and grandmother pig



I read a book that title is “Oliver, Amanda, and grandmother pig”. This book has 5 stories.

First story, grandmother comes to Oliver and Amanda’s house. The children wanted to read a book and build with blocks but, she cannot because, she has bad eyes and bad legs.

Second story, when Amanda woke up early, grandmother was in the kitchen. Then, they ate breakfast together, go to the mailbox. They help each other.

Third story, Oliver did a trick. He takes grandmother’s glasses and put them on his tiger. Grandmother had a problem. Then, his father scolded him and grandmother comes in Oliver’s room. And she talks him about trick when she was a child. He promised that never trick.

Fourth story, that day was bad weather so grandmother and the children were find how to prevent thunder’s noise.

Last story, grandmother will go home next day. So the children and their parents made a “good by party”. They made a pink big cake.

I do not have memory when I was a child with grandmother. I really wanted to play with my grandmother looks like the grandmother of story.
(190 words)(7851 words)

Dinner♭


Today’s dinner was curry rice!! My mother cooked us it. Today, There were no family members so I ate it alone; I felt sad. I think that to eat with my people is precious thing.
The curry's ingredient is chicken, carrot, onion, potato, and so on. Once in a while, she put bell pepper. It is very delicious!! Recently, I am not help her when she cook for dinner ;( So I will help her next time!!
(77 words)

Vacation plans!!

I will go to New Zealand for the overseas induction in August. I am looking forward to go there! Now, I am preparing many things for it. I want to know about NZ's cultures and communicate with a lot of people. I want to do many things!! In September, I should study Japanese. I will take examination to be a Japanese teacher. The test is very difficult!! I study for it since this spring. I have a class twice a week. There is it in summer vacation too. Maybe, the seasons, will became busier than now. Next spring vacation, I will go to Korea with my friends! I want to eat a lot of Korean dishes. I am looking forward too!!!
(122 words)(7584 words)

About blogging

Recently, I often write a diary on my blog. I should write ten thousand until the end of this month. Now, I write about seven thousand so that is not good enough. I do not like to use the computer but I like to write diary by the computer. Now, I am taking part is mixi. I write diary every day. It is fun. But blogger is I should write in English so it is very difficult! But, I want to be a good writer. So I decided to write diary on my blog this month. And I will paste many pictures!!
(102 words)

Okonomiyaki((♪



Last week, I went to "Daiminji" with my friends, Kyoko and Aya. I like okonomiyaki very much!! To make is very difficult. I felt nervous!! But I could make well and delicious!! I was full^^
Next, we went to Karioke to sing songs. We sang a lot of singer's songs. Ayumi Hamasaki, Arashi, Kinki Kids,Yuzu and so on.
That day, I had a enjoyable time with friends♪
(67 words) (7360 words)

Get well with students in YMCA☆







Last Saturday, There was a party at YMCA. Every Wednesday, I go there to volunteer with my friends, Aya and Noriko. We prepared about that content for the party. We thought some games. It was very hard because it was not so far so good. I was worried.

That day, I felt tension but there’s teacher supported us. There were many foreigners. Most people were Korean and Chinese. They came to Japan to study Japanese. There are not only good speaker but also not good speaker.

First, we separated for blood type and we made four groups. Then, we introduced ourselves.

Next, we played games!! One game is a “Shiritori” with writing on paper. The game was very excited! Other game is “True or False”. The countries’ delegate are set questions. We could know about each countries! I was surprised because there is a orthopedics street!

Last, we had lunch!! Everybody brought food and we ate many kinds of dishes. I brought hot cake. There were a lot of countries food. I like chinese dish so I was very glad! Best food was Harumaki!! It was very delicious^^

The best memory is making same friends!! I met a girl who is a Chinese. She is very cute and good at speek Japanese!! Someday, I want to talk more with her again.

The party was very excited!! I had a enjoyable time. I want to be a Japanese teacher in the future. So I should study more!!



(246 words)